“Learner profile: Ashley”
Ashley has graduate from high school in Long Island, but she didn’t attend in college. Also, she wants to be a dentist. She has live in the United Stated for four year and she had been live four year in New York. Furthermore, she studied in English more than 10 years; the most difficult for her is writhe and Vocabulary. She prefers working with classmates and prefers in speaking part. Moreover, she doesn’t like to read in English or her first language. This semester, her goal is pass CATW text. Last, I think she is nice, humorous and i would like to be her fried.
''New story"-draft 3 This article states that ALS patients want to make GM6 medicine available for everyone. It started by giving some facst and A.L.S patients’ idea to make GM6 become medicine cabinet early. It says that GM6 has shown “12 person trial to dramatically slow down the progression on the disease.” After that, Rilozale may help ALS patients, but it is expensive and it has some negative side effecst like weakness and difficulty breathing. Furthermore, more than120,000 people have signed an online petition to let GM6 become available to 30,000 people. The article ends by safe that ALS patients claim they want to take the risk because they can’t wait 12 year.
Childhood Obesity
Many children have suffered from obesity. Children hood obesity is when a child has a problem with being overweight. People have overweight most likely to suffer from stigmatization, the high blood pressure. Moreover, when they grow up they have great risk to get heart disease. Therefore, government is trying finding a solution to reduce the number of children who have obesity. This essay describes proposed solutions to the problem of childhood obesity. Finally, this essay will proper best solution and explain its benefits。 The local government in Puerto Rico is considering creating a law as way to stop or reduce number of obesity. The Puerto Rico law is a law to force parents to pay fine, so they would do everything to encourage their child to lose weight. Teacher identify child who have overweight and make record, then sent to health department advisers to find a cause and make a plan for them. Kids would check every four weeks for improvement. They don’t show weight lose after 6 mouths, their parents will pay 500 dollars. If, kids did not show lose weight on other 6 mouths, fine would become 800 dollar. Another way to reduce childhood overweight is to eat vegetable can help reduce fat. According to article “Eat the right vegetable fight bill fat.” By Erin Palinski-Wade from Belly Fat Diet For Dummies In the article, vegetable have a great amount of volume and few calories, this mean you can eat a lot, but less calories. Vegetable have rich in many powerful vitamins A and C, which decrease oxidative stress and cut down on the stress hormones in the body that can store belly fat and folic acid, which plays a critical role in protein digestion and metabolism. Finally, vegetable have some nutrients like catenin and anthocyanin help increase your body ability to burn fat. Some believe school should add classes to educate student. I think that is beset solution, because student need to know what happens if they get overweight. They would worried and take serious to balance their own weight without other people force and notice. In addition, they know what is cause obesity. They would change their bad habit. Moreover, they would know what they should do if they have obesity. They would started stop eat fast food, exercise and get enough sleep, they also know who can help them and make a plan to reduce faster.
In the article “Born For Each Other” by Pamela Withers, the author explains how birth order affects your personality and your future life. In Wither’s ideas, the youngest child in the family tends to be out going, optimistic, and a little bit ambitious. I agree his first idea that birth order will affect personality, but it will never affect the future life. When I was young, I had a similar personality that the author mentioned. For example, I had no problem with conversation toward people whom I had never met before. When i arrived to the U.S.A didn’t worry or consider anything about my future. On the other hand, my oldest brother felt homesick and kept worrying about life in America. Right now, I am an optimistic person because there is something sticking my mind; if one way is closed, it will always have another way to do. Moreover, my family always encourages me. However time really can change everything, even the personality you have. Now, as an adult I have to worry about myself.
Love is accept and be responsibility. It is not true? I still remember a story that a singer who shows us when you in true love, everything is no matter. The singer fall love with his girlfriend and he decide to marry with her. Life is not always perfected, his girlfriend gets car accident and she has no longer to walk, to feed and to take care herself. The singer did not walk away; instantly he stays with her and take responsibility. Underneath he can just forget about promise and walk away, after that he would look for other and get new started. No one will blame him because they did not marry yet and to take someone rest of life is not essay. Moreover, He has deal a lot difficult situation: pay rent and care her in daily life. If love is endured and not responsibility, he may leave her and find other lover, he definitely have a better life because he never deal with those problems。Therefore,Love is accept and be responsibility.
Friendship
Francis Bacon said, “A false friend is more dangerous than an open enemy.” This means people are always aware of an open enemy, but no one notices a false friend. For me, a false friend is a hidden enemy, they drop you down to become a loser. A false friend may give you bad idea and influence, and in the end they will stab you on your back.
A false friend is a bad influence, he or she will lead you to walk into death. Imaging, you walk into school, you most likely to see a person who is surrounding with a “good friend”. They give a best advice to you like cut class, don’t do homework and school is not important at all. Even you reject once it does not mean is over, they would ask you again and again until you agree. Later, you start cut class, stop go to school and you always involved with serious problems. Most likely you would become familiar process and become part of them. In end of school year, you find your report card is not same as the before. As time goes by, you would lose a chance to go to college and end up with bad job which mean you become loser. In addition, a false friend may lead you into smoke. Friends ask you to smoke and he or she will give one cigarette. If you refuse, a friend may say to you “it is not cool” and you may find it is difficult to interact with your friend. As you know smoking is not good for your health. You may get cancer, respiratory diseases and heart disease. Yet, you still will ignore it, so you think are cool and find yourself no longer isolated from the group. Unfortunately, you are not cool, just hurt yourself by increasing chances to get disease and your life may not become as easy and happy as before. Moreover, you may imitate a false friend bad behavior, then you would become a person who disrespect to other and talk insult. It may not look like a big problem, but sometimes you may lose the chance to get a job, decrease interaction with other people and find yourself always getting into trouble. You never know what way you false friend may drop you down to become a loser. Throughout the world many people have been betray and died by false friend. In Rome, a person named Gaius Julius Caesar had victory the several wars leading to him to become an unmatched military power. He gained power and became dictatorship, Some people thought one day he may became the king of Roman Empire. Therefore, they decided to assassinate him. When Caesar went to senatus alone, he did not notice his best friend Luicus Junis Brurtus who he trusted the most was trying to kill him. Until Caesar died, he still wouldn’t believe his friend killed him.
A false friend is dangerous than the enemy you know, because a false friend is the one who knows a lot about you and the one you trust. Don’t let a false just bring you down and wake you become loser. A false friend may betray you, just like Caesar story, he never thought he would die, but he was assassinated by his “good friend.”
CATW practice
what is good thing about aerobic exercise? Most people think about is get shape that they want. Surprisingly, two experiments 20 minutes of walk and twin who have same parent and same background led researchers believe aerobic exercise may increase score in test. I certainly agree that people who do aerobic exercise would get higher score then people who have not,But i think more important is people should get enough sleep and eat health food.
People assume when we are sleep, our brain stop function. some function like when we awake we product some chemical which make our tire,then we are sleep our mid is clean them. For example, when i came to the USA and i used We-chat to as tool to talk or share something to my friend. The problem is China and American have difference zone and i would not go bed early.As result, i was lack sleep and felt tire everyday. When you tire on school, you would not pay attention in class and would not take a note. Moreover, is very difficult to do homework and study.
Health food not only help you to be health, it also help people keep shape. If you look around, people who are overweight they most likely to eat MAC and drink soda and you can see their face fill with tire. People eat food and absorb something such as vitamin A. I think brain also need something from food and brain can function well.
people do more aerobic exercise may increase test score, but i believe enough sleep and health food also can increase test score as well.
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